Feedback, front cover first draft and magazine advertisement second draft

Now that we have completed the first drafts of our Cd cover and magazine advertisement our lecturer assessed what we had produced so far and gave us feedback. Both our print tasks were graded at B, meaning were working on target.


The positive feedback we recieved for our CD cover was that the body language and look of the image was relevant and showed a knowledge of the target audience and that the image and text were intergrated well. The criticisms we recieved for out CD cover were that the image could more controversial and we could make it more relevant to the theme and target audience, and that the text could stand out more, perhaps add an effect to it.
The positive feedback we recieved for our magazine advertisement was that it was very quirky and appealing and we showed a good knowledge of conventions and our target audience. In order to improve the advertisement it was suggested we could add reviews of the single to the page.
To improve our grade we should consider retaking the photos and making them more controversial and we should complete the drafts for the rest of the digipack.